While editing the Constitution for the purposes of clarifying what the RA has actually voted upon last Sunday, I found that we have so many patches in it, that some don't make any sense at all Jamie's proposed changes were just to make sure that candidates could run for elections for the RA without being faction members. While factions were not abolished — the right of peaceful assembly for political reasons is a fundamental universal right! — they now don't have automatic ties to the RA membership; that is, if the 7-day-votes don't vote against the change (which is unlikely) or the SC doesn't ratify these.
There are, however, a lot of things that are "leftovers" from the past that ought simply be stricken out. The most fundamental bit of "constitutional garbage" is the frequent reference to the Artisanal Collective (the former Guild) which doesn't exist any longer as a body of Government. There were good reasons for leaving some reference for it. The Executive effectively "took over" (in the good sense of the word!!) most of the constitutional responsibilities of the Artisanal Collective, and since some laws still made reference to it, it made sense to add a few words on the Constitution to remind that the change has retroactive effects on those laws mentioning powers of the AC — which would be neatly transferred to the Executive instead.
After such a long time in having an Executive (over two years now, gosh!), I think it's time that the references to the old Artisanal Collective should be deleted from the Constitution. I suggest that it is just briefly referred at Art II, Section 9 - AC Overlap.
It is usually felt — by the older citizens at least — that the so-called "New Guild" in a way "replaces" the old Artisanal Collective. But this is not strictly correct. The "New Guild" is a chartered NGO, independent of political struggles, and without Government status. The charter defines its role and relationship as an advisory body and a source for building/development contracts, as well as the limits to its membership (which the Constitution duplicates, but for the old, non-existing AC). Thus I think it's irrelevant and perhaps confusing to list the same things on the Constitution and I suggest that they be deleted.
In the past, a certain committee, allegedly led by a very lazy procrastinator (yours truly ), was supposed to review possible changes to the Constitution, as well as redefining citizenship. Since that committee has long been disbanded (they only exist for a term, unless re-instated), I guess that this would mean there is no clear group "endowed" with the burden of proposing suggestions to it.
Citizenship, indeed, was shortly brought up recently in connection to the zero-price land sales. It was argued by a few (namely, Jamie, who definitely convinced me with his arguments; but he was not the only one) that the land price is set relatively arbitrarily, and the mere buying of land is not a good measure of citizenship status (think about speculators, for instance!). On the other hand, regularly paying tier, which is the basis upon which our CDS budget is founded (because, at the very least, that's how we pay Linden Lab for our sims!), is a far better foundation for citizenship. I tend now to agree. Tier, for instance, is not subject to speculation: it is set by Government. Land sale prices can be originally set by Government, but it can vary due to speculation. Land sales can be seen as mostly a "commodity" that can be traded in a free market, and tying citizenship to the ownership of a commodity seems now to me to be a bit strange. It's like if we stipulated that to become a citizen you had to buy, say, a plywood cube for L$10.000! On the other hand, a citizen that continues to invest money every month by paying tier fees has a more "solid" claim on citizenship. It's by staying around and paying tier that a citizen shows that they value their original property and continue to give grounds for enforcement — their investment in time and money is more directly reflected in the tier payments than on the initial land sale.
Similarly, the status of "group-based" citizens is at least... confusing. We have laws allowing two citizens, each having their own plots and paying their own tier, to form a group that holds all plots, and remain citizens nevertheless, even if their original plots have vanished and are now group-owned plots. This has been seen as a potential for abuse: all it takes is for a bunch of citizens to buy microparcels (which are not available any more, but you get my point...), join a group, then sell all the parcels to a single citizen who will pay tier on their behalf, discard the original plots, but remain citizens of the CDS, with full voting rights. Now the law originally was created to allow citizens to partner together and, to a degree, enjoy a larger common parcel beyond the legal limits of the 4096 m2 per sim. Due to the restrictions on the way groups work, the law currently in force (NL 5-9) recognised citizens the right to create groups to represent their common land ownership, so long as each group member at least contributes L$100 to monthly tier fees. Again, you can see how even this law gives more emphasis on "tier" payments than on "paying to buy a land plot" as the criterium for continuing to be a citizen.
With all the above in mind, here go my proposed changes:
Preamble: change "SL" to "Second Life (SL)" and "ToS" to "Terms of Service (ToS)" to ensure a proper reading.
Art I
Section 1: Replace "city" by "regions administered by the CDS"
Section 2:
Number each paragraph with (a), (b), (c)
Eliminate the sentence "* Dates recently changed by RA, and these take effect after the next general election. The first RA elections where candidates are not required to be a member of any faction will be for the term starting June 1, 2010" (which is just a note really)
Section 3:
Replace "anuual" with "annual"
Put "pro tempore" in italics.
Section 6: After "Constitutional amendments require a 2/3 vote" replace "an absolute supermajority vote of two-thirds" (this is what was always intended; while "simple majority" automatically assumes "of members present", "2/3 vote" is not clear that all members have to be counted, not only present ones.
Section 7:
Also number each paragraph/sentence with (a), (b), (c)
Replace "The RA can amend the constitution with a 2/3 vote." with "The RA can amend the constitution with "an absolute supermajority vote of two-thirds" (see above). This is technically redundant to list here, as Sec 6. already lists it. To be discussed.
Section 8:
Add (a), (b), etc.
Eiminate "Chancellor" and "Guildmaster" and replace with "Executive"
Article II - The Executive
Section 4: Eliminate "of Neufriestadt or any other" and replace simply by "of any" (it's time we stop giving importance to Neufreistadt )
Section 5:
Add (a), (b), (c) etc
Delete: "This provision shall come into force with the next RA election following passage and ratification of this amendment. (ed. note: the Seventh RA)" since it is already in force and we don't need the reminder any longer.
Remove "The Chancellor may hold a position in the Artisanal Collective but may not vote therein." since the Artisanal Collective doesn't exist any longer (note that the New Guild's charter already forbids the Chancellor to vote in it).
Section 6:
Replace "by at least a two-thirds majority" with "by an absolute supermajority of two-thirds".
Replace "web forums or wiki" by "any official web presence of the CDS" (the wiki is not being used any longer, and we might migrate to different technologies and leave the forums
Section 7: Again, replace "by at least a two thirds vote" with "by an absolute supermajority of two-thirds".
Section 9: Just requires a clarification. We haven't amended all past laws that still have "Artisanal Collective" in it, so this section has sadly to stay. So the clarification is just to replace "assigned to the Artisan's Collective" with "assigned to the extinct branch known as 'Artisan's Collective' which is still mentioned on the Code of Laws".
Article III
Section 2 - I think that each sentence should also be labelled (a), (b), (c) etc. and the phrase "can be voted out with a 2/3 majority" should be changed to "can be voted out with an absolute supermajority of two-thirds". Note that there is a subtle difference between "Professors" and "Chairs", which the SC really never cared much about: the idea is that Professors have all the rights as Chairs except the right to vote on ratifications or to hold trials. Since we never had a SC with more than 9 members, this separation of roles never existed.
Section 4 - likewise, "with the concurrence of two-thirds" to be replaced with: "with an absolute supermajority vote of two-thirds".
Section 8 - To be consistent, 1., 2., 3. ought to be (a), (b), (c).
Section 9 - replace "with a 2/3 majority" with "with an absolute supermajority vote of two-thirds"
Article V
Section 1 - There has been some confusion about who sets the dates. Recently, the SC has pushed the elections in the future because there were not enough candidates. Technically, it's the RA that sets the dates. However, the Constitution says: "[...]whose duration will be fixed by the RA by passing appropriate laws." Now if it's a law, it always needs ratification by the SC. One assumes that a law formerly passed to set a date, if not changed, will continue to be in effect, but this is arguable. Perhaps we need a clarification here: what happens if the RA hasn't set a date?
Section 3 needs a title, I suggest "Eligibility"
Article VI
Section 1 should be numbered (a), (b), (c) for consistency.
Now the more profound changes...
New (b) (insert after the existing 1.) The title to land is considered to be held for as long as a citizen duly pays his or her fees according to the size and location of the parcel of land held ("tier fees"). The amount and periodicity of due fees is to be determined by law and enforced by the Executive.
(c) Citizenship is personal, granted to a single individual, and not transferrable or negotiable. For the purposes of Second Life, one and only one avatar is considered to represent an individual's citizenship grant.
[Notes: The idea is that the "grant of title of land in the CDS" is an act that is not tied to a single moment (ie. buying a parcel), but is a process, defined in terms of SL as "paying tier". You might remember that a citizen is only allowed to vote 28 days after they have bought a parcel. This would be consistent with paying the first tier after the first month; only that would actually validate the continuing status of "being a citizen".
This also mirrors some national legislation, where members of associations are only considered to be "voting members" (or eligible members to the organisation's Board or other bodies) with full membership status so long as they pay their fees. You might be charged an "entry fee" to an organisation like that (which pays for administrative charges, e.g. entering your name on a database, giving you a membership card, etc.), but it's the recurring "membership fee" that actually determines your membership status. Delinquent members have no right; c.f. what happens if you don't pay your land tier fees to LL and what happens to your belongings in SL when you stop paying your fees
Furthermore, it doesn't preclude — or eliminate — NL 5-9. Under my proposed VI. 1. (b), laws would fix the amount of recurrent fees that a citizen has to pay to continue to be a citizen, so long as that fee is understood to grant entitlement to land. NL 5-9 does precisely that: group-owned land is land held by citizens; by owning land, fees are not exactly paid "by parcel" but by different rules, but fees are still paid. My proposed constitutional change does not violate NL 5-9 either. It just makes clear that you can't simply join a group and be a citizen; you have to have had citizen status before, join a group, and be enrolled to pay monthly tier fees (which would just be part of the total amount for that parcel of land]
Delete Article VII - The Judiciary (repealed); since it was repealed, there is no reason to keep a note of it