It may be just me - and in fact it probably is - but do any of the readers of this forum grasp fully what is the intended meaning of the following provisions on citizenship in the Constitution:
[quote="The Constitution, Article VI - Citizenship":108msrh8]
Article VI - Citizenship
1. A citizen of the Confederation of Democratic Simulators is a resident of SecondLife? who has been granted title to any land by the Confederation of Democratic Simulators, and who holds title under the Confederation of Democratic Simulators, for as long as he or she holds such title.
2. Without prejudice to any rule of law entitling any institution of government to substitute, or empower another person or body to substitute any land held by any citizen for any other land the holding of which would continue to entitle the person whose land has been substituted to be a citizen of the Confederation of Democratic Simulators, no citizen shall be deprived of citizenship in the Confederation of Democratic Simulators, nor shall any person, whether a citizen or not, be banished from any public land in the Confederation of Democratic Simulators, without trial in accordance with law, or consent not to be so tried.
3. Section 2 above is subject to any rule of law whereby a person is deemed to have consented not to be tried by having failed within reasonable time to respond or respond fully to any notice sent to that person in respect of any such prospective trial, nor any rule that specifies what shall constitute a reasonable time.
4. Section 2 above shall be without prejudice to any rule of law whereby a person may summarily be banished by any citizen of the Confederation of Democratic Simulators appointed for such a purpose by any duly ratified Act of the Representative Assembly (or by any person or body deriving her his or its power to do so from any such Act), for up to fourteen consecutive days (but without revocation of citizenship or forfeiture of any asset).
5. Section 2 above shall be without prejudice to any rule of law whereby a person may be banished temporarily by Order of a Court of Common Jurisdiction pending such a trial as is mentioned therein (but without revocation of citizenship or forfeiture of any asset).
6. Any citizen may cease to become a citizen by submitting a notice in a form that may be prescribed by any duly ratified Act of the Representative Assembly (or, if no such form is specified, by notifying the Chancellor in writing) seven days in advance of the date on which that person is to cease to be a citizen.
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I wanted to quote an old version of the citizenship article to show how simple it used to look but alas I am again unable to access the wiki.
EDIT: I managed to get access to the wiki through another DNS. This is what the clauses on citizenship used to look like:
[quote="Old Constitution":108msrh8]Section 1 - Eligibility
Citizens must agree to uphold the constitution. Citizens are those persons who own private land in sims subject to the city government.
Section 2 - Discharge
Citizens must give a one-week notice before leaving the group or removing land tiers. In return the city guarantees a hearing and a one-week grace period before revoking citizenship. Citizenship may be revoked for violation of city laws or covenants, failure to uphold the constitution, or non payment of land fees.
Section 3 - Departure Ultimatums
Citizens are may not issue departure ultimatums to members of the government. In return the government will not issue discharge ultimatums to citizens. [/quote:108msrh8]
While this is obviously not perfect either and definitely dated (nobody donates tier anymore, what is "a hearing" and what does "subject to city government" actually mean?) I think this latter approach at least has the benefit of being readable.
I'd be thrilled if somebody who understands the current text as quoted in the above could publish an outline of what each clause actually means and does, and if somebody on the basis of that was able to redraft the language to be of the sort that even I could understand with a minimum amount of effort I might be so impressed I'd be going through the roof.
Seriously though, I think the above is a good illustration of the need to introduce a constitutional revision with the aim of making more accessible the text of the Constitution. The Simplicity Party stands for just this policy so I hope that a majority of the RA can agree to put such an effort into the legislative programme of this term.